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Nov 29, 2012 | 12:15 PM EST

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First in the Series, inspired by AlekidThunder and rogerregorroger.
Personally i think this may be where I start to not Suck. The Art's a bit bad, but otherwise Enjoy!



Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Bad animation but you have a good thing going there keep trying.


Rated 1 / 5 stars

The voices were a little hard to understand through most of it. What setting did you publish the audio? Exporting the sounds as ACDPM at 44khz usually works with clearing up the sound.

There is apparent effort in this. The story was longer than many submissions, but not boring. The artwork, you've already remarked about, but it's not the worst I've seen. You'll automatically get better as you go. Don't let this get you down; I want to see more from you because I know you'll get better with time.

100Dylman responds:

i didnt bother changing the settings when exportin from audacity, but thats not the proble, it how im recording it


Rated 1 / 5 stars

It needs a lot of improvement. The animation along with the voice overs were not that desirable. the plot was ok though. i get what you're trying to convey but it wasn't really clear. I mean, i'm assuming your still new to this (i am too and i got the same criticism) so you shouldn't stop at this and take my advise to consideration. if you try to apply yourself more and try your best to improve everything, you could make something amazing but you need more time

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Rated 0 / 5 stars

I'm sure you spent a decent amount of time on this, but I'm sorry to say it isn't on par with the minimum animation quality needed for it to survive here on newgrounds.

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Rated 1 / 5 stars

It's not the greatest thing i've seen here the art and the cuts and silences are very bad too the voice acting isn't that great either also the pictures you use are not framed right and are not very good to look at or even easy to. I'm sorry but I have to rate this low as it's not a very good production.