ninja stuffs, first flash
Author Comments
this is my first flash, dont hate on me too much, i did it all in flash, no separate programs
this is my first flash, dont hate on me too much, i did it all in flash, no separate programs
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Reviews
Rated 3 / 5 stars December 4, 2012
it's really not that bad for a first flash
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars November 28, 2012
Although this is obviously noobish, it's really not that bad for a first flash. Often, first flashes are horrible or short. This actually has a semi-understandable story, and a decent run. The text was small, and went by fast enough that it was hard (impossible) to read, but I could still follow the story. ...or make up my own.
All first flashes should be like this or better. Thank you for actually caring, and not submitting a crappy first flash! :)
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars November 27, 2012
Not too shabby. Keep practicing.
Rated 3 / 5 stars November 27, 2012
Not bad for your first flash!
Some suggestions:
1.Dont be afraid to speed up the movement. I'm sure your a Naruto fan..So we both know, they dont throw things that slow.
2.Polish up your environment a bit!
3. Experiment a bit with frame by frame animation. You have a pretty good handle of tweens , but now its time to try something different.
good job overall!
Rated 2 / 5 stars November 27, 2012
Needs work, like the speed of the thrown knives/shurikens are way to slow and there is an overuse of metric tools to create the background. The attack thing with the hands would have needed a few extra frames too, as it's hard to see whats happening. Not a bad try, but it needs some work.