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I took a look at the input of my previous submission, and this is what I've come up with.
YES, I realize it doesn't do too much--saying that doesn't help me at all!
However, I would like to know your opinion on the overall fluidity and smoothness of the animation. I will remove this as soon as I complete something fully.
As an introduction to your Flash movies this is both fluid and acceptable. While I personally have no interest in the music attached that could solely be personal preference. Overall as an introduction stand alone I'm giving you four stars, but I still voted 0 on the actual voting since this isn't completed content anyways. :)
Liked it quite a bit - possibly due to the animation & really nice style :) Particularly the fading in intro coupled with the pulse of the orange border (just noticed that the music keeps playing on after, not sure if it is intentional or not - if not, I can give you a link to a tutorial), either way, nice!
Hahaha yeah that was intentional. Thanks for the comments, though! :D
Pretty good for what it's worth, I would use a lighter color for the text though. I like the near pastel colors
A short film about a park bench
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