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Being able to Time travel doesn't mean your smart.
I guess the audio was good, but it still sounded 'boxked.' But I like the theme you're using :/
This could have been funny as hell, but it feels very rushed.
Um, some of the voices were off, it might just be my computer, but you should check on that, the artwork is nice, but not well animated because of the sketch movement and the way they are always rocking and they never move anywhere takes away from the short films ability to convey emotion of the situation, whether it be dire or comical, is completely up for grasp, and neither seem likely. No bonds or character traits are relatable because of the animation, not the storytelling. A few tweeks and this could be decent. Also, have the dialogue be more natural and not so ordered, too much time between responses. Lots of potential in your abilities.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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