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Matt, Jonathan, and Sebas run into some trouble when Hurricane Sandy causes unfavorable rifts in space-time!
Jonathan: Just so you know Matt and I both are bronies and are not trying to make fun of the show in any way.
Matt: After months of work, it's finally finished! Thanks to all of my friends who supported us in the extremely long production process. Look out for part two in Spring 2013!
Dedicated to Edd Gould (1988-2012)
Your animation is poor and ponies are awesome. The story isn't engaging, either.
Really shouldn't have given it three whole stars then, huh?
In this gay forest in this gay land in a gay city and ponies wich are gaaaaay.XD
I like it,coz of my name.
...Wow. You aren't too bright, are you?
lol cool but need to be made longer .
It was five minutes yo.
If I can give one piece of constructive criticism, it would be the volume of your voice when you're screaming. I see this all the time, and the "quiet yelling" NEVER sounds good. I understand you probably have neighbors/roomates/parents/whatever around, but when a scream is warranted, just do it. Warn anyone who might here you in advance if you have to, just DO NOT try to scream quietly, it always sounds awful.
Other than that, a nice concept you got working on. Good luck
Thanks for the advice!
This is my first review, so forgive me for any absense of anything in my review :)
I loved the plot, interesting and caught my attention.
Before reading the Author Comments (I didn't know there was one till 5 seconds ago xD) something reminded me of Edds animation (which I am a Major fan of. It might of been the style)
I personally think the characters are great, but need more expression when voice acting. For example when Jon (I think it was Jon :D) fell in the pony world, he didn't really seemed surprised and when Pinkie found him and he screamed 'Help!' he didn't put much expression into, seeming the character doesnt really care about the sitation (not to sound like an English teacher xD).
Also, the background coulve been a slight bit better, like the forest is copies of the same background (which i find understandable, considering how much work and elbow grease you put into this) I am also an animator, in this must of took a long time to animate, Good Job!
Overall, it was awesome! Please continue, consider me one of your fans! :D
God Bless You!~
For a first review you did a fine job! Thank you for the feedback, and since this is the first episode we got plenty of time to improve ^_^ /)
Feeling sorry for yourself doesn't get you anywhere...
First episode: Trolls attack the village and heroes come to defend it.
A short animation about Journey
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