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This is a battle between the top tablets, who will win?
Ok. same format as the others.
Sound: 0/10 It was non existant. Not even any epic music or anything? just one little sound when they hit eachother. Try putting in more noises and maybe giving them voices that could show character. Add some comedy maybe and make apple sound like a dick.
Animation: 3/10 It was ok. idk. Still could use a lot of work. pretty choppy. The drawing was ok but it could be better. And the one thing: if you want to call it a battle make it a battle. Dont make a 20 second clip a battle. 3 minutes minumum and crap exploding everywhere.
Idea: 4/10 good thought but maybe make their actual traits as hardware affect the fight. Like Apple exploding and then another, if it was a battle there would be multiple, run up and say "Did your ipad just explode? well there is an app for that!" and then fixing it.
the animation was fine (a bit choppy though) but the sound was bad and it was too short. when you upload to newgrounds it has to be longer if you want a better rating. next time add a soundtrack, make it longer, export at better sound quality, and don't make it loop.
Dude wtf is this shit
lame. this one star vote is being generous (bad speller i am)
Id give you 4 stars, but i... hate... apple...
A short film about a park bench
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