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After 1 year of work... The fifth part of the series is ready. Contains lots of text in the beginning so if you don't have the patience to w8 for the action, please be tolerant. :>
Not bad, perspective is a huge problem i see you having. Not to mention the audio department was severely lacking. The large mess that i have to say was the audio could have been done much much better with a slight amount of work. the music had no reason or transitions. the sound effects were random and unpurposeful. When in doubt for voices go 16bit or 8 bit and just put square blips as voices. the story was unclear and text zoomed by when they needed to stay and stayed when they should have been much faster. Like wise goes to the scenes. They were transitioning past parts that needed longer action and the still shots seemed to pan for ages. over all the concept was there and i can tell what you were trying for, but you lacked the structure to get it across. Unfortunately is simply came out as some what of a mess.
Ty for review.
A short film about a park bench
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