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Here's a little Flash I've done to practice myself. It turned out good, I guess.
Well, the video was pretty short, and I understood where you were coming from with comedy being so easy these days. But I feel as though you could have put a little more effort into it. That being said, I like your animation, and I have a little giggle at the end with the mic wobbling and falling down.
w-what?what is this? just, just, what!?
Though basic, it wasn't bad. The only problem, and the big question: you couldn't include the whole joke? That made no sense, and it wasn't really funny. This was your opportunity to sock in a great joke from somewhere and animate it, and everyone would love it, but this fell flat. :\
People might pass this, but I gave you a 0/5 for your score. Your score might pass, but it could've been so much better if the joke was good. Redo it and resubmit and see how much better it's received once it has a decent joke.
This needs a bit more humor added in. This was a decent attempt, though.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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