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Nov 6, 2012 | 12:50 PM EST
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A little something I made for Tomska back in October.

Reviews


robertmilesrobertmiles

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

it was awsome



PyrocumulusPyrocumulus

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Mildly amusing. Not amazing or anything, but ok.



YuukazeYuukaze

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Amusing arrow-in-the-knee joke without actually saying the words. Noticed the rube goldberg thing as sweetcommando did, though I do think it was rather well done. 3.5 stars.



PunkDiva3388PunkDiva3388

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Weird and funny....


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hypercritichypercritic

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Fantastic premise, but in my opinion the title of the piece gives the entire thing away. The animation is great with pretty much expert timing and consistency. However some events and shots genuinely go by too fast; there's no buildup or tension break before the crow finishes things off, for example (I had this same sort of pacing problem with Adventure Babies).

A lot of characters also suffered from the patented 'Zeurel wacky face' with the spazzy pupils, large gaping mouth and crazy teeth. This hasn't always been a problem with your work (for example, Robo Western), but it has been cropping up a little more often than I feel it should - even if it is like your signature in a way.

Aside from those few quips, everything else was fine. You're setting a great example here by a) actually making original animations and b) having a strong, consistent work ethic. So good job.