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Nov 6, 2012 | 12:50 PM EST
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A little something I made for Tomska back in October.

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hypercritichypercritic

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars November 8, 2012

Fantastic premise, but in my opinion the title of the piece gives the entire thing away. The animation is great with pretty much expert timing and consistency. However some events and shots genuinely go by too fast; there's no buildup or tension break before the crow finishes things off, for example (I had this same sort of pacing problem with Adventure Babies).

A lot of characters also suffered from the patented 'Zeurel wacky face' with the spazzy pupils, large gaping mouth and crazy teeth. This hasn't always been a problem with your work (for example, Robo Western), but it has been cropping up a little more often than I feel it should - even if it is like your signature in a way.

Aside from those few quips, everything else was fine. You're setting a great example here by a) actually making original animations and b) having a strong, consistent work ethic. So good job.



OmegasisOmegasis

Rated 5 / 5 stars November 8, 2012

Man, you should make this kind of stuff for living.
You're awesome! o.o



rinsakurinsaku

Rated 5 / 5 stars November 8, 2012

Make hentai and make money.



ThothyGoodnethThothyGoodneth

Rated 5 / 5 stars November 8, 2012

The tags alone for this animation deserve a 5/5


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GhettoPanda11GhettoPanda11

Rated 5 / 5 stars November 8, 2012

I think everyone has been distracted by a girl with large breasts in so many situations.


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