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This is our Harvey Norman Competition Entry, we got through the first round which was public voting, now we're being jusdged by Harvey Norman people, whoever they choose wins.
This flash, I feel, is very lacking in multiple areas. Firstly the animation, while very smooth looking, was very minimalistic only really animating a few things at a time with an extreme lack of color that annoyed me. More vibrant colors would give the flash a very unique sense of style instead of the primary black and white colors used prominently throughout the flash.
Secondly, the audio seems very one-shot inserting bits of nonsense in at random intervals. This made the story the animation tried to convey fairly confusing because of no real sense of flow throughout the narrative. Things seem to happen "just because" and that is never a good sign in writing.
Overall, this flash seems like it was done very quick. Everything about it practically screams, "I was done in five minutes!". With more attention given to the flash, this stigma could potentially disappear and thus raise the score. However, right now, that is not the case.
Seemed to be a bit sloppy.
The animation itself was a mixture of some story(?) and frame by frame animating which was good to see. However, I feel a little more time could have been spent making the animation much cleaner in looks.
The audio itself, you both need to be a lot closer to the microphone so your voices are clearer. That and it felt like the voices were just inserted at random aside from that calculator looking device near the end.
Overall, I feel this could have been done much better than it currently is. Hope you both do well in future animations.
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