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Oct 22, 2012 | 5:01 AM EDT

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Hello Newgrounds I need your feedback, I want to know if people will like this game!
I'm really hoping it will get good feedback because I don't know if I should keep going with it. please tell me what you like/dislike, bugs and if you see this game going well in the future :)

Thanks - jamtheman1017

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rivj3rivj3

Rated 3 / 5 stars October 22, 2012

found a bug.
-Picked Virus level
-Picked, and throwed the rock at the ground
-Picked up key
-Typed, open door
-i can't open it, so i tried it at the window.
-doesn't work, but when i restarted the lvl and choose to open Window, it opens!
-typed go inside, worked, then the game just bugged again
sorry if there any bad english, not fluent with it.



geraiahgeraiah

Rated 1 / 5 stars October 22, 2012

The amount of commands that can be used are very scarce. "get" and "take" or "pick up" doesn't work the same. There should be a standard command for certain actions like "enter" (to enter somewhere), "open"(to open locks, doors, etc.), "get" (to pick up items from the ground), "use" (to use an item that had been collected), etc...And please, include the working commands in the help.

There should be sense in the tasks and objectives.
The "look" command only works once.
There should be a feedback if you entered a wrong command like: "The key doesn't fit the key hole of the door" or something like that. Because when I used the key to the door, the key disappeared and I had no choice but to lose the game. Fix it.

Use your imagination in creating scenarios, add some item combinations and stuff.

You should've completed the game and tested it out with some friends before sharing it to the world.
Anyway, don't quit making games. Game developers didn't create masterpieces on their first trials. I like these kind of games, so I'm giving you a star even if it's still not working properly...

Goodluck.


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neworleansdudeneworleansdude

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars October 22, 2012

It's really not that intuitive. The differences in things like 'pick up' vs. 'throw'. It's too language sensitive to really be that fun. The music isn't that bad but it gets old quick. I enjoy simple graphics and gameplay, but trying to guess the words you want ME to use for you puzzles isn't fun.

I know in the help section you said to make sentences simple, I did that. Trying to keep it to 'Noun Verb Object' basically, but too often I couldn't get the action done I sought.

Also if you get something wrong there should be some sort of hint as to how it's wrong.

I don't want to sound mean in this review, but if you want positive criticism I'm trying.

-but it's like you're asking people to play a game based on how your brain works... not generalities.

I hope you tweak it and I have a chance to play it again at some later point.



fhp007fhp007

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars October 22, 2012

the vocabulary is annoying: I know what to do, but I don't know what it wants me to call it; and if I can't spell it right, then I'm fucked. Perhaps you could add a list of the words that the game understands.



GreenDragon42GreenDragon42

Rated 1 / 5 stars October 22, 2012

the only level that seems to have any words workign is the outside of the Virus Level, and i'm assuming the Nyan cat is unclickable, as the mouse moves the screen away from it. Good idea, but the game doesnt seem to work at all