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My "love letter" to rural America, or more specifically, the southeastern U.S.
It was funny, but the "Oh lord bring it down", was murderously annoying and made the video hard to laugh at even though there were good jokes.
I'll try to be constructive here, but remember this is somewhat based on my own opinion as well: I think this was pretty funny. I liked most of the jokes, and some even made me laugh :D. I like the art work, it kind of gives me that "squidbilly" feeling. Although, I think it could use more color and more/better animation. Also, the constant and exactly the same "oh lord bring it down on me", started to get on my nerves. I would suggest making the joke cuts different or not so frequent. I think this submission should be saved, but needs work :).
Though the southeastern U.S. may not appreciate this as much, this made me laugh out loud. Pretty funny dialogue!
That's fine because I didn't appreciate them much, either. Moving away after living there 24 years is like getting a spiritual enema (one aspect I didn't put into this piece).
I understood nothing. I laughed at everything.
Drawing is pretty good. +4 for humor and creativity!
-0.5 for how confusion. Took me a while to get it.
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