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this is my first attempt to make an animation, hope you find it funny.
I'd say its not bad for your first one. Congrats on your first animation!
I would advise you to make future submissions a bit longer. Also, slow down the text towards the end so we have time to read it. Nice job!
thanks for the feedback :)
Well, considering this was your first attempt, I'll go easy on you.
The animation worked pretty well, everything seemed to work out when Mario was running and all... it was a tad funny and I, personally, liked it. Unfortunately, there were a few bad things that made this, er, less enjoyable. It was much too short, I expected a lot more. Or at least, a little more. Second, the ability to simply start and replay the movie would have been nice, rather than just have it loop over and over again. Second, the text moves too fast, when you're telling us about the Goombas getting pointlessly slaughtered. It took me a couple of times to read the entire thing. However, I personally liked this and would like to see an extended and improved version of the Goomba Army take rise. :)
thanks for the review, i'll surely improve my ability for a second video :)
This was a nice decent little short! Basically its the U.S Army tidbit but without it being over flashy and straight to the point. I admired the sprite and audio of an era long (but not forgotten). The duration is short and such but that's the only honest mild complaint I have. Everything else is fine in your creative standpoint. I'm going to bestow you a 2/5 and a 2/5 in voting power. Keep practicing, creating and contributing on here. You did a good job friend! I hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.
thanks a lot dude, i did enjoy your review :)
the text was too fast and mario moved quite stiff
A short film about a park bench
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