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i made this film many years ago and never finished the series after i realized i was in way over my head. decided to finally upload this to show friends
dont make more ever.
This'd be frontpaged if you had better audio, I think.
The intro of the movie it's not the best I've seen, but you redeem yourself with the movie itself. I think there is too much text on the intro, it would be better if it was somebody speaking instead of a tiny yellow text. The movie itself it's quite good. I'm not giving you more than 3 stars, 'cos I think you can improve a lot in your drawing.
Anyway, I think you have great potential in what you did, the scenes design look like holiwood but in bad graphics. If you improve this, you can make great things!
Well.. Even though you uploaded this just to show friends, you should definately finish it. Sounds like it could have been awesome, if you gave it another shot.. Any plans for finishing this?
A short film about a park bench
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