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A short stop motion video based on the book P.J. The Spoiled Bunny by Marilyn Sadlen
That was cute and traditional! There were a few minor scrapes and bruises in this but its nothing too virtually bad. I noticed during the opening credits that they would be a little far too the left mostly near the side of the screen. Also I'm not certain but during the baseball part of the story it appeared that the ball was still in the same position as the tale progressed kind of bringing minor consistency to the scene. The audio was a tad bit soft yet the dialogue straight from the book was all witty and cute. Your emphasis as "The Narrator" was quite nice. All in all though I loved the concept, you rarely see such technique or methods like that used since either it comes out completely wrong the individuals that undergo them just don't have the time or patience to get it up right before their intended deadlines. I'm going to bestow you a 2 in a half out of 5. And a 3/5 i voting power. I really did enjoy it, I reiterate from earlier you just don't see such classic methods used around much anymore. Hopefully you can create more tales? Or perhaps continue or experiment on this concept? Eitherway, I honestly think you do well! I hope you've enjoyed this review friend. Good day.
Wow thank you so much for taking the time to tell me what you thought! I'm really glad you liked it :) I've really liked this book for a long time and I've always wanted to do an animation like this. It was actually for a school project that I put off until the last minute. Had I had more time the quality would have been better. I'm glad you liked my narration though =D
And yeah, I did totally mess up that part with the baseball lol, plus the kite part was reaaally bad
Thanks again for your review! :)
I did not like it, barley any sound, and bad animation. Not to mention it is a children story, sorry just not my cup of tea.
Well FUCK YOU then
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