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Next time I'll put more work into the animation, i'll run it at 24 fps and use fancy motion tween with easing and such. promise.
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Not bad. Some of these were actually pretty funny. I'm a bit confused though.. Some of the good dialogue you did have was smothered, for lack of a better word, by poor animation. You even openly admit, in your author comment, that you would "put more work" into your next animation...My question to you is Why didn't you put more work in this time? Why not wait until this was polished more before submitting? This was good, but unfinished.. Looking forward to your next one.
"Butthole" "Did you realize what a little shit you are?" "RAAAAHHHRRGHHHHH!"
Please, it could have been funny if you hadn't tried to be so "lolsorandumb"
The dog, elephant thing was a bit funny. But, it was all downhill from there.
Move away from the mic when you talk, cut down on useless profanity, (I'm not saying swearing isn't funny, but overusing it is kinda irritating) Have a joke, work towards it, tell it, and move on.
Again, the elephant thing would have been funnier if the other guy just stared at the "dog" owner.
The video wasn't awful, but it wasn't very good.
A short film about a park bench
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