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i love this animation but i just don't like the vocals in the opening
TANK U 4 WASTING UR TIME
Well it's a step in the right direction
I mean I appreciate you trying to copy the Psychic Pebble/ Speedo sausage style but I gotta say the humor could be a LOT more better then this. Not that I can give any pointers but just keep practicing. Also the transitions were a bit much
Other then that you guys have potential
Ok I am going to try an honest legetimate review so here goes. In my opinion the humor in this flash is subpar, it could have been a lot funnier if you put more effort into thinking up of clever orginal jokes as opposed to the jokes in the flash. As for my opinion on the animation I thought that it was decent considering the length of the flash, I know it is hard to have detailed high quality animation in a longer cartoon. Next up the theme of the flash, I loved how this flash is a parody of adventure time, I absolutely love the original show and this is the first flash I have seen on newgrounds parodying it. All in all I moderately enjoyed it, if it wasn't for the fact that the flash is based on adventure time I would have voted 2.5 stars instead of the 3.5 stars I gave you. If you put more effort into the jokes and animation and continue making adventure time parodies, I would love to see more. Good luck buddy.
A short film about a park bench
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