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Oct 14, 2012 | 3:02 PM EDT

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This is my first flash, I hope you guys like it. I understand I have a lot to learn but tell me what you think.



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Dude plugging your nose for that snorked nose guys... friggin hilarious voice overs dude! lol

CriticalCrown responds:

Thanks man, I appreciate it!


Rated 4 / 5 stars

I lIKED it coz it woz simpl an n simpl comedy that mke me laf a littl bit. dry lol com,edy. n it looped ha

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CriticalCrown responds:

Right on.


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

This was pretty good friend! Not bad for a first animation. For some weird reason this brings me back on the style and situational humor of [Adult Swim]'s "Home Movies". Your art style was very rough and relatively bland. Audio was a bit hard to listen without watching this again various amounts a time to understand most of the dialogue. It has very pivotal and very witty written dialogue. As previously mentioned you've done a good job here. I'm going to bestow you a 1 in a half out of 5. And a 2/5 in voting power. Keep practicing, creating and contributing here. I hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.

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CriticalCrown responds:

Thank you for the responce, it is cool that you bring up "Home Movies", because it is a big inspiration in my animation, and my sense of humor in this animation revolves around the same humor as "Home Movies".