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Two friends go for a ride! eek!
although short in time.....pretty good, I thought!! thxs
You are so polite! :)
Lol. A skeleton with a sucker. I wish I would have thought of that first. and I like how you did the car. I think you do cars better than i do because when i draw them, they look like the ones from the 70's. Anyway a tip regarding the road, make the road a differnt shade of grey from the background.
The animation overall was entertaining, and that's all i really care about.
Keep it up!
Thank you for the review and all your support! You are so much fun and I will try and repair the road to a lighter color. Thanks for the tip.
Charming in its own respect.
This cartoon was certainly unique, and you certainly have a unique style. Normally I disapprove of the use of bitmaps, though your use of bitmaps is stylized and interesting.
Some of the animation wasn't polished and sometimes their legs were still moving even when they weren't walking, but animation doesn't have to be perfect and the fact that it isn't adds to the charm.
The voice acting seemed a little awkward, like the intonation did not match the words. This didn't add to the charm though, it just felt a bit odd to watch and to listen to.
It's obvious that you put time and effort into this, and I enjoyed it overall. 3/5
Thank you very much for the helpful review. I will try to make corrections on the legs but I find it very hard to do lip with audio voices. Yes I did put a lot of time into this flash swf and I will try to improve after reading your comment. Thank you for being so attentive
A short film about a park bench
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