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Oct 12, 2012 | 11:25 PM EDT

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This is my second proper flash animation and would like it if you could give things to improve on.



Rated 3 / 5 stars

5000 seems a bit mutch for 1 guy


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

The animation was very nicely done. The movements were very smooth and natural and are better than the animation in half of the cartoons on this site. However, the line quality truly detracts from the quality of the animation.

Like the other reviewers said, I'd suggest making your lines look cleaner. Even though they may seem arbitrary and useless, in the end they make a big difference.

That being said, there were some timing issues with the animation. Despite the amount of effort put into animating this, some of the animation was choppy and at some points, awkward.

If you have a tablet, the line quality can definitely be improved.

If you have a mouse, I will like to suggest using the pencil/line tool. I'm usually against any usage of the pencil/line tool, though it's understandable if you're animating with a mouse. If you do try this though, please make your line thickness vary to add depth. If they're all the same thickness, it looks robotic and mechanical.

The music was nice and it fit the mood of the flash.


Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

its noy good at all and need effort like dialogues and a stroy


Rated 1 / 5 stars

ok short and sweet 1


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

I didn't really understand your video .. keep working on your skills tho!