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The downside to being a snail.
Short and sweet like your other submission. Like I said before, the art style is simplistic, but the animation is smooth and the art style fits the idea. The idea is a little cliched, though you still did a nice job of executing it. I liked the use of audio here, as it helped set the initial mood. I also liked the environment art / background you did in the beginning. That was very nicely done. Good luck in your future animations!
nicely done. though to me it felt like it was missing something...not sure what though
That was very original and funny! Style wise it was bland, plain and simple. But it was the hilarity and the message that ensued and prevailed above all else in this short. Audio was decent as well, especially to add minor understanding and "tension" for the Snail's perspective. I reiterate from before, the story is very original. A simple snail is out and about near a park or public resting area and is enjoying a quick bite. Then the calamity and horror approached from above! ... You've done very well my friend. I'm going to bestow you a solid 3/5. And a 3/5 in voting power. I really liked this one since it has alot of original concept to it, particularly the story and the situation presented. Keep practicing, creating and contributing on here. I hope you've enjoyed this review friend. Good day.
A short film about a park bench
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