Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
born with a mutated head, hank an otherwise normal person. attends weekly meeting with other people who have been deemed hideous, scary or murderous...
Concept and animation are great, but... Do not try to mix this with comedy. This can be great horror serial. Comedy or parody... Nah, no chance, don't blow up this (I see you want to make parodies on Jason or Fredy).
And I agree with VennGrey,music bacground is worst part. OK you will need serious music for horror, or a bit brighter if you still want that idea of parody. But music must match animation, it is important part - for example in first sequel it would be enough just baby cries, until she sees him (nicely done) then omnius music without drums. And ect... I won't bother you.
And yeah, for this you will need voice actors or at least subtitles. That is big minus as well.
This concept is a bit disturbing, but I can see how it could be humorous and possibly interesting. The view of the mothers eye seeing the child, and rolling back, was a great idea and well done.
The animation is a bit rigid, but it's decent. Some scenes have nicer drawn images than others though, making it inconsistent. I didn't like all of the transitioning effect you did after he offered the flower. The end part of the effect was kind of nice, but the start of the transition just looked sloppy.
The music was my least favourite thing by far. It was distracting, with a poorly done drum loop, and added nothing to the animation. Really consider your music as an important part of the film, as it can set the tone in a fantastic way, or completely ruin something that would otherwise be good.
Good luck with your animations.
Very good friend! I don't know if its my system or not but the animation lagged from time to time but the concept was awesome itself. Your style is detailed and unique for flash animation. Audio was nice and rhthmatic some. Your idea about a figure attending horror sessions and therapy is an original concept that is not too new but barely even explored neither! I'm going to bestow you a 3 in a half out of 5. And a 4/5 in voting power. I hope your creation comes to life here soon! I also hoped you've enjoyed this review friend. Good day.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.