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"Uh, yeah. Hi, there!"
So this is basically my first flash movie I did for me and some friends. I admit it's kinda crappy but hey, pretty good for first flash!
sorry, but i think i could do better with close to zero experience! a tip: try making the shots longer so the viewer has the time to see whats goin on. And maybe you could add a bit of a storyline to it? even short stories can be fun ( 20s )
Waste of time. Not trying to be mean, but it was bland, no sound, and only like 4 seconds long. Shouldn't be on newgrounds.
If it only had sound...that would make it a lot better. Also, can you please make it longer? But it was a pretty good 3 seconds.
This was decent little short. It lacks many crucial elements but I do honestly admit you have good basic animation techniques down compared to others that I have witnessed here. Duration was a tad short, style was very good, lack of audio makes me wonder some but not enough to ruin the imagination presented to me here. I reiterate you've done a god job here. I'm going to bestow you a 1 in a half out of 5. And a 2/5 in voting power. Keep practicing, creating and contributing on here. I hope you've enjoyed this review friend. Good day.
Thanks, I didn't plan on releasing it but did anyway. I have no mic, which would explain the audio problem.
The gingerbread man wizard was pretty well drawn so it is obvious that you know how to animate. However, the gingerbread guy was all that there was. Sure he gets eaten but that wasn't even animated. You definitely have skill, this just wasn't an overly interesting animation. The words went by so fast that I couldn't even read them. Also, some sound would have been nice.
Thanks for some honest critique! This was originally just a small flash for some friends but I figured I'd upload it here. You see, just having learned the basics and having no microphone available makes this flash pretty "newbie". And I agree about the words.
Going back, one last time...
Detective Nwar untangles a massive copycat kidnapping conspiracy.
Joel runs out of shivs. Surley Ellie is not carrying anything that'll help him
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