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i really wanted to work on this so bam here it is newgrounds enjoy i tried to debug the bugs but there was alot so yeah
Fun storyline. smooth animation but pls fix some better sounds and stop the loop at the end or put replay buttons
Could have been a bit longer and actually gone somewhere. But credit to you for your work.
Maybe get a pop filter too as those POPS are lethal!
Is this your first submission? If so, its not bad!
Great job synchronizing the voices and facial movements. I would suggest maybe improving the art a bit, but its not too bad. I would also invest in a decent mic for vocals..I can tell this is a case of hardware and not necessarily your voices. I look forward to your next episode!
To do list;
-Add a Loader
-Buy a Microphone
-Record audio again
-Change credits background
-Change Credits Font
-Change Credit Font Color
-Come up with a plot
-Write a sketch/draw a storyboard
-Submit to Newgrounds.
Seems to me you have work to do.
Going back, one last time...
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