Fun storyline. smooth animation but pls fix some better sounds and stop the loop at the end or put replay buttons
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i really wanted to work on this so bam here it is newgrounds enjoy i tried to debug the bugs but there was alot so yeah
Could have been a bit longer and actually gone somewhere. But credit to you for your work.
Maybe get a pop filter too as those POPS are lethal!
Is this your first submission? If so, its not bad!
Great job synchronizing the voices and facial movements. I would suggest maybe improving the art a bit, but its not too bad. I would also invest in a decent mic for vocals..I can tell this is a case of hardware and not necessarily your voices. I look forward to your next episode!
To do list;
-Add a Loader
-Buy a Microphone
-Record audio again
-Change credits background
-Change Credits Font
-Change Credit Font Color
-Come up with a plot
-Write a sketch/draw a storyboard
-Remake flash
-Submit to Newgrounds.
Seems to me you have work to do.