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Oct 8, 2012 | 1:16 PM EDT

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A poor, inexperienced glass goes to his best friend for relationship advice.

The last time I submitted something to NG I was 14 years old.
Hopefully the 7 years between then and now have helped.

Enjoy!

Reviews


caleb4494caleb4494

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 9, 2012

It's funny but it needs to be a bit longer felt like the joke was cut short.
The audio was a bit hard to understand you should may think about a better mic.



CamoRalphCamoRalph

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars October 9, 2012

hah! decent effort man!

Even though there wasn't really a plot, I still found it funny and entertaining. I think my main crit would be to not focus so much on the "stuttering" type of voice acting. I know everyone does it now days (Family Guy in particular) - and to be honest it can work in a small scenario or cut-away... but as a whole short it gets boring. The audience ends up saying "spit it out already!!"

In this case it would have boosted the performance if the green cup were more assertive, a dominant character. That way, you have clear contrast.

Good effort though man, looking forward to more!



NewgroundSageNewgroundSage

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars October 8, 2012

This was cute and funny! Style wise it was very simple in design. Audio was a tad bit soft but was still good if you listen closely to the situation at hand. This is good animation to say the least, especially in a seven year gap from you previous entry. You should be proud of your work and continue on if your interested in the field of animation. I found the ending hilarious and messed up for that poor glass! I'm going to bestow you a 2 in a half out of 5 and a 3/5 in voting power. Keep practicing, creating and contributing on here. I hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.



urosdj11urosdj11

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars October 9, 2012

its ok


BoomBawks responds:

Duly noted, thanks for the advice!