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A poor, inexperienced glass goes to his best friend for relationship advice.
The last time I submitted something to NG I was 14 years old.
Hopefully the 7 years between then and now have helped.
It's funny but it needs to be a bit longer felt like the joke was cut short.
The audio was a bit hard to understand you should may think about a better mic.
hah! decent effort man!
Even though there wasn't really a plot, I still found it funny and entertaining. I think my main crit would be to not focus so much on the "stuttering" type of voice acting. I know everyone does it now days (Family Guy in particular) - and to be honest it can work in a small scenario or cut-away... but as a whole short it gets boring. The audience ends up saying "spit it out already!!"
In this case it would have boosted the performance if the green cup were more assertive, a dominant character. That way, you have clear contrast.
Good effort though man, looking forward to more!
This was cute and funny! Style wise it was very simple in design. Audio was a tad bit soft but was still good if you listen closely to the situation at hand. This is good animation to say the least, especially in a seven year gap from you previous entry. You should be proud of your work and continue on if your interested in the field of animation. I found the ending hilarious and messed up for that poor glass! I'm going to bestow you a 2 in a half out of 5 and a 3/5 in voting power. Keep practicing, creating and contributing on here. I hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.
Duly noted, thanks for the advice!
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