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The first episode of Zombie Doll!
Well that was kind of good, are you gonna do more of theses episodes and stuff...?
that was complely awesome, like a more intelectual foamy. props \,,/,
I REALLY enjoyed that. Very funny. Where's the subscribe button!?!? LOL
Don't want to sound like I found anything wrong with it (because I didn't), but the interaction between Zed and Zoe seemed similar to Foamy and Germaine for some reason. Wonder if on purpose or unintentional.. eh. Still touchin on that subscribe button.
(looks for button)
What do you mean there's no subscribe button?
A lot of good in this, I think your only issue here is that a lot of the side characters are relying on the same kind of jokes. I think if there was a more unique differential between them it would add significantly to the humor factor for a wider range of viewers. For instance the curse words, as simple as making one character who constantly use them, instead use obscure references in place of curse words, and it will add to the dimension. As of now very shortly into the cartoon I had started to find the profanity not amusing and I curse a lot. I realized the situation was too many characters were using it in the same method, with the same delivery. Even just having one of them gently whisper out their curse word everytime they used it would have changed this. Anyways, I look forward to more of this. The Satan bit cracked me up.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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