I've been working on this for the past few months and I'm fairly happy with how it came out.
I tried this different style for the background. I made them separately in paint tool SAI with a painted kind of look to it. It was a bit more work but it does look nice, although I don't think I'll ever do it that way again. Haha.
I noticed I have problems with consistency too. It's something I'm gonna need to work on.
Anyways, I was commissioned to make this by FenrirKar on DeviantArt. They gave the premise of the story and I did the rest.