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The timing was really bad and the jokes weren't very interesting. I won't address the sound and voice acting though since that's explained.
I see a lot of potential for something like this. There's actually a creepy pasta called Deat Bart.
This was strange and creepy. That's obviously what you were going for, and you've basically nailed it.
My criticisms center around the animation during one scene and the oddly placed humor; you've already addressed the voice acting and sound, so I won't mention that.
In the second scene where Homer beats Bart, the animation is a little lazy. It's really only in that scene.
My other criticism is with the third scene with Homer in the power plant. The humor just seems oddly placed. I feel like this could have been left out or moved before the second scene.
Other than that, you mostly achieved what you set out to do. The credits were also interesting as well.
That was fucked up, but I can see what you were going for.
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