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Oct 5, 2012 | 10:52 AM EDT

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Plz check out my YouTube and DeviantArt
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MistyEntertainmentMistyEntertainment

Rated 3 / 5 stars October 6, 2012

Hmm.

This was entertaining, though probably not in the way you intended it to be. I think the animation was alright considering the simplistic stick characters. Normally I'd complain about the sticks but for an idea like "How to Win At Soccer" I think sticks might be fitting characters for getting the point across.

The way you set everything up was clever, and I liked the timing between each of the 10 steps. The voice acting definitely felt like a sitcom. At some parts it was pretty decent while during other parts the voice acting was flat, but I guess that added to the humor.

There were some misspelled words but who cares.

3/5

Keep making flashes, don't give up!


100Dylman responds:

tnx 4 ur support so far (ur the 1 who commented on SFGC right?) plz check out my youtube: youtube.co m/100Dylman


OgillaGorillaOgillaGorilla

Rated 0 / 5 stars October 6, 2012

I honestly dont feel like you even tried. Its like you really just wanted to talk. Pivot is a horrible program to use unless you have some made skill and awesome imagination. Im sorry but this was just horrible. I would have respected the effort a lot more if you even tried to animate something. Instead of just pictures and your voice.


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NewgroundSageNewgroundSage

Rated 2 / 5 stars October 5, 2012

That was pretty good friend! I noticed some minor flaws such as background noise in the audio (through dialogue). The animation has some minor transitional problems just before the bumpers are displayed. Your concept though is cute, adorable and original in humor! I can tell your just getting into the field of animation. The more you conquer your minor flaws and improve upon them the more closer you come in to victory! You've done well on here friend and should be proud for you early attempts and jabs on your creation/project. I'm going to give you a 2/5 and a 2/5 in voting power. Keep practicing, creating and distributing on here. I hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.


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WobbleGobbleWobbleGobble

Rated 0 / 5 stars October 5, 2012

the animations were bad, the voice acting was bad (maybe record next time in a quite room). just keep at it, over time as you learn more your videos will get better.


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100Dylman responds:

tnx but would u believe i recorded it like dat on purpose 2 go 4 a sitcom type style (but i could've proberly got an actual laughter sound somewhere)


DragenDragen

Rated 0 / 5 stars October 5, 2012

Unless it's actually good, don't upload a pivot animation on here.


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100Dylman responds:

my next flash (my halloween special) is being made in macromedia flash 8 (it has stick figures but i promise it's better)