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It took me between 30 and 40 minutes this time. This was a try to see what can I animate in a short time.
I played your game and you are in the ILLUMINATI COMMUNITY YOU ***********
This was rushed and sloppy, even for a time trial.
If you're going to try a time trial to see what you can do in a short time, I'd suggest at the very least that you try to make your flash have an entertaining premise. A lot of the scenes were static, and had dialogue that even had misspellings.
This was a nice attempt at making something interesting, though there are many storytelling aspects that you have to consider and implement into your writing if you want your viewer to feel anything at all.
Even though this was a time trial, it would've been better if you just went with the most common method, which is to take your time to make something very enjoyable.
Good luck in your future movies.
Thanks, I shall do so ;)
This reminds me of an artist named naruto vampy, ninjafox1020. I love the storyline and the main character, "HATE" is so awesome. It's like vampy's long lost brother!
Thank you. I will work more on the backgrounds and I hope that someday I'll make a good animation.
This was a bit mixed in my eyes. It felt a bit hastened yet from the last time I saw your previous works you've done almost the same thing (in a sense). Your story is the only thing I see and its supposed to be a tale of tragedy with mild tongue and cheek humor thrown in for good measure. Its a nice unique attempt to create something in so little time but I notice that there can be some minor subtle problems as well in ones works. It a unique challenge to test yourself yet the most common method is to take your time and patience with your creative work and then you can sort out minor bumps and bruises. But other than that you did alright friend! I'm going to bestow you a 2 in a half out of 5. And a 2/5 in voting power. I hope you've enjoyed this review and keep crafting and continuing on here! Good day.
I'll work more and more on my animatioons :) 40 minutes next one :) (or more)
i honestly found this boring.
"Everything by everyone". I am glad that you saw it tho. Thanks, mate.
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