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Done in less than 48 hours for the movie jam, so at the moment, it's a little rushed and unpolished, but that's to be expected.
might need some fixing up with the ending j/s
Looks like you should have spent more than 48 hours. The concept is pretty beautiful and deep, but the animation is pretty crappy sometimes. Then, I'll to my favs, and I really like it, but you should pull it out to make it look better.
I was intending to clean up some of the rougher parts this week.
.....WTF WAS THAT? ok, i understand abstract art and whatnot, and there are deeper meanings behind things, but with this... its just so hidden.. what EXACTLY were you trying to get across with this? because i have to many theories to choose one. and if you dont even know, then this deserves 2.5 for the animation and nothing else. because thats just false art =/
I DO know, so everything you just said is wrong and stupid.
Really choppy animation, but of course that can be forgiven. The story is really where this movie suffers. In no reality would a father ever do something like this. We're supposed to sympathize with the father, and we do until the end when he just completely 180s and kills his daughter and himself. Just mean spirited and very jarring.
Did you stop to consider why he would do that?
Looks like the girl rly missed her dad :(...
This story makes cry...*sniff*
Alfred's Back and Better Rendered than Ever
The gang attempts to raise money for turtle's surgery
Fighting the shame of our stations in life...
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