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Oh, it is not that much because my micrphone is broken. Nay!
lol.........Zombisdate rules...! nice one
THE END NO MAKE SENSE AND I DONT HER TO GOOD THE VOICE
pretty good.....i liked it!!
I like you!!!
the beginning was nice, but near the end i got lost.... at one part it looked as if her breast was out with very pink nipples... idk, maybe a tad but more work on the artwork.. and get your self a better mic... and redo it, i'm sure it will be alright... maybe you should make it a bit longer as well... it was kinda short..
I thought you review was very helpful. I will try and make some small corrections. Thanks for viewing and commenting.
Kind of nice flash, I noticed that the artowrk could use some more detail, subtitles if you may, and last but not least, a better microphone.
Nice try though, should redo and better results should come your way!
Thanks for the tips! I will try harder on my next submission.
A short film about a park bench
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