3/5 scored and reviewed

A very big improvement of what I've seen, smoother animation, good lip synching, pretty fluid all around pretty good. But good god man, that voice of yours simply can not pass for acceptable. Please get some voice actors, you can post VA wanted ads on the flash forums, many do theirs for free, at least do them for Female voice acting roles, as clearly, yours doesn't cut it, not even for funny.

Other than that, ok joke, even though obvious and quite predictable. I like the improvements though, they quite out shine the negatives in this. Just get some better VA's and perhaps a better script, your ideas are ok but they aren't all too original or provide a very big punch. I do a bit of script if you're interested. The best kinds of flash are a team effort pulled from all over the community, don't be afraid to ask for help. Keep it up.

- Hollow -

the only reason i'm giving this such a low rating, is for originality. i've seen this same skit plenty of other places.

I agree that is was a good idea, but the voice acting needed some work. That's why I left a star out.

waste of time not funny

Actually made me laugh, everything was good except for a minor error, there was just some low framerate quality at the point where it is zooming in on his face, and if that was fixed it would be quite literally a perfect animation. Keep working on your animation :)