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Very well done. I liked the humor of the first two a bit bette, but this is in no way a step down.
zone and raven.....zone and raven or starfire and raven or zone and starfire man i would LOVE to see that all in all great show
User Blessing is way to hard on you. Music was great, tentacle rape is always excellent, and the writing is wonderful. Especially the end part. I love watching you fap. The comment, not the... I liked the episode...
Also, if your interested, I've got several of the background monsters from Foster's Home for Imaginary Friends. Wanna swap Raven for a day or two?
Not too shabby. Not too shabby at all!
Here's what I liked:
-The art style was very clean and precise.
-The animation was the smoothest I've ever seen from such a tween-heavy cartoon.
-The girl had really solid voice acting, as did Raven. The narrator's voice acting wasn't bad.
Here's what I didn't:
-Although the animation was smooth, the method you used meant really smooth transitions between the same handful of poses.
-Some of the writing was a little cliche (like anything related to tentacle rape), some of it was just gross (the mayonnaise comment was just disgusting, not funny), and some of it was just forced (like the "get on with it" bit with the narrator losing his temper, or the "watching you fap" line).
-The music at the end was waaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyy too loud (you should edit your audio to make sure it's all close to the same volume).
-News (or sports announcing) coworkers passive aggressively going at it is a pretty overdone cliche in general.
Overall this toon had its ups and downs, kinda left me with mixed feelings, but I think it was MOSTLY good so I'll score it as such. Keep up the good work!
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