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.SWF messed up the lip syncing so to watch it in better quality visit RoJaStudios on youtube :)
The plot seems like it took 8 seconds to come up with, and it wouldn't hurt to improve your voice for the situation. I understand you're barely starting and I like your attempt at being random. But it doesn't help when you're so random nothing makes sense.
It pretty much needs some work on the vocals and the story. The animation is pretty good though, you got some good skill on that field.
Still, practice makes perfect. Don't give up.
I'm not sure if you tried... but the voicing was bad, the plot was bereft of details, and the animation was cheap (stick-figures, really?). I can't guarantee you got potential for this kind of stuff, at least, not yet.
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