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.SWF messed up the lip syncing so to watch it in better quality visit RoJaStudios on youtube :)
I'm glad you said you just started animating because it helps put this into perspective better.For just starting out this was pretty good,little things like the saliva spraying from the dudes mouth (who had a bit of a lisp i think) was a nice touch.Small details like that can go a long way,so you should keep those in your tool belt.Obviously,flesh out a much better plot on the next one and maybe throw in a little background music for good measure and you might have a pretty entertaining movie.Pretty good first shot though,keep it up.
I'm not sure if you tried... but the voicing was bad, the plot was bereft of details, and the animation was cheap (stick-figures, really?). I can't guarantee you got potential for this kind of stuff, at least, not yet.
It pretty much needs some work on the vocals and the story. The animation is pretty good though, you got some good skill on that field.
Still, practice makes perfect. Don't give up.
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