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http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/589930 - Link for last episode
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=ulvrgKIxng0 - link for the HD youtube version (for slower PCs!)
New Fenada episode, everyone! Sorry for the long wait.
Thanks again to everyone who helped me! ;3; I appreciate it
Enjoy! Have a good one!
EDIT: Thanks for daily second! :)
I love how you brought more personality to the character, I'm so excited for the next episode :D
Thank you! :)
A funny piece if nothing else.I'm curious about where this story is heading,so i'll be keeping my eye out for future installments.I have an idea or two,but why risk spoiling the plot?I'll just wait and see if I'm right.
"Yeah dad I'm go have sex with all the ghosts and stuff" -Troll Face-
I'm glad that there's a start to a plot in this episode. The first episode didn't really set up any plot or story, just some basic character exposition. So a nice improvement there.
Art is good. Animation is good, though a bit jerky at times. No big deal.
The big problem I felt was the framing and cuts. Several cuts were awkward or even unnecessary; it threw off pacing at times and that did more to distract than to enhance the scene or shot. Same with the framing, though that was far less often.
There's room for improvement and I'm sure you'll do so over the next few episodes. Keep it up!
Well that was QUITE interestin'. Goin' to a haunted mansion, last chance....now this is something I'll be waiting to see. Really love how you put some effort in this animation with the extras. Like shining cross, gradient light on the girl, sooo very good. It did make me smile when the dad just yelled, not saying. Just yelling. I'll be waitin' for dat next one. Hopefully you do make it.
guy drains his main vein.
The first episode of my original anime
Two Men Fight to the Death!
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