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http://www.newgrounds.com /portal/view/589930 - Link for last episode
http://www.youtube.com/wa tch?v=ulvrgKIxng0 - link for the HD youtube version (for slower PCs!)
New Fenada episode, everyone! Sorry for the long wait.
Thanks again to everyone who helped me! ;3; I appreciate it
Enjoy! Have a good one!
EDIT: Thanks for daily second! :)
Great animation, great colors, decent script.
To explain the loss of .5 stars, not that it matters...
This tried too hard to pull off a cliche anime feel, and despite your typical 'theme' of animation/identity, that artform is very lost nowadays because it was bad.
Rina-chan screaming excessively and repeatedly could be tolerated, let's face it, situation appropriate and she's got a lovely voice. However, it would be more likely to be one, long, blood-curdling scream with a more frustrated nature. My point is, a lot of the more upbeat emotions need to be addressed, more excitement, more anger, scream in that god damn microphone.
As for Miguel's father, you chose TomaMoto as the voice actor. The father's design, coupled with this voice, is a little bit off. Type-casting is bad, but make the father it bit more grizzled to at least reflect the manly-man voice that is Toma.
To further address the animation, your side-view anatomy is suffering from flounder-syndrome. Simply put, when your characters' heads turn to the side, it just looks weird and lopsided. the noses need a bit more work and tooth-to-lip separation needs to happen. Also, don't make the side view out-proportion the rest of the body.
Otherwise, you need to consider making this a big project on your part. I know you're working on TOME and other projects, but Fenada needs some deserving focus.
So far I'm liking Fenada... but something is "off" about this episode. I'm not sure what it is. Something about it feels awkward or forced or unnatural. It might be that some of the animation is clunky. It might be that some of the lines have odd timing. I'm... I'm honestly not sure. Overall I liked it. Something just felt weird to me. Could be nothing.
What's "Fenada" mean, anyway?
I admit this episode's kind of weird. Mostly because it's setting the ground work. The next episode should feel a bit more... whole? At least, I hope so.
I'm glad you're liking it so far! I hope to improve as a go on! :)
As for what Fenada means, it's a bit spoilerish, so I can't tell yet!
Something about these characters reminds me of the old Metropolis manga.
that was a pretty good flash but all it needed was randomy
Interesting portrayl of teenage rebellious phase.
A short film about a park bench
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