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Hey everyone, this is Team Necronomicon's entry for the 2nd NG Movie Jam. Made in 48 hours.
The theme, Too scared to _____. We chose swim.
Thanks for the Frontpage Tom!
Bunch of pusses; give em hell king toes.
The Toe will not let them get away for their pansy like emotions. Thanks for watching
don't exactly know why someone said this made no sense it was clear he was afraid of the water... if you didn't get it you must be dense.
Your Rating: 3.5
The animation was light-hearted and mediocre. However, the tidbit of comedy element was in there.
You lost 1.5 because you need to maintain a defined art style in your animation; make us know who you are without needing to read your name when the creds role.
Second, your voice quality was off. The spikey-haired bruiser boy was a little too fake-masculant in the voice and the chicken-boy was too girly.
Make it believable.
Also, look into getting better microphones so you don't kill headphone users.
I'll keep the audio in mind for the headphone users next time.
I know it's complicated to make a movie jam in 48 hours, so thumbs up for making it. Still, I think you guys saw too big on this one: your story was too long, and I think when you realised it was to much work you rushed through the graphic part, making a big loss in quality. You've got talent, just work on smoother animation and character style, that's always the priority over plot and length.
Yeah story was way to long. Had to pretty much use first draft drawings as the main ones cause of time. If I do another movie jam I'll be sure to make it short and sweet. That way the animation can be cleaned up a lot more.
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