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In a world where a mechanical society controls death, one Timekeeper refuses to fulfil his role.
Commission info at:
Music by Jimmy Sudekum, OST downloadable on his page.
As always, thanks a bunch for the front page :)
Ohmagerd a daily first, THANKYOU!
Aaand a review pick, weekly 3rd and short spot as the 3rd top vid of all time. Seriously people, feel the love
While the animation and voice acting was great, I'm left with a sense of confusion. There leaves a lot to be desired storywise.
For example, why did the girl have to die, why did her timekeeper try to protect her, does every person have a timekeeper, what is the motive of the timekeeper they call Lord to continue what they do?
If these questions were answered during the clip then 5/5 all the way, but there was a lot of lacking for me to give you guys that full grade. I hope to see this continue with some answers soon!
That was absolutely fantastic. I love the beginning of a good story. It's like waking up on Christmas morning and seeing all the presents under the tree, waiting to be unwrapped.
Voice acting and music are phenomenal but the sound fx are inconsistent and sometimes lacking :( the mix of the overall audio could use a mild tuning for continuity as well. Afterwards, you can sell me the dvd release for $9.99 per episode :)
(see how I used constructive criticism followed by an overwhelming compliment? You wont see this kind of sh*t on youtube! lol)
WHAT!? NO! NEXT!
I laughed, i cried,and i shit myself when he hit her eye with the ball.I'm ready for part 2!
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