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Sep 27, 2012 | 7:00 PM EDT
  • Review Crew Pick October 3, 2012
  • Daily Feature September 29, 2012
  • Weekly 3rd Place October 3, 2012

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www.clayos.co.uk
In a world where a mechanical society controls death, one Timekeeper refuses to fulfil his role.

Commission info at:
http://kreids-clayos.devi antart.com/

Music by Jimmy Sudekum, OST downloadable on his page.
http://jsudekum.newground s.com/
http://soundcloud.com/jim my-sudekum

As always, thanks a bunch for the front page :)
Ohmagerd a daily first, THANKYOU!
Aaand a review pick, weekly 3rd and short spot as the 3rd top vid of all time. Seriously people, feel the love

Reviews


RiksdstroyerRiksdstroyer

Rated 5 / 5 stars

ANd..... the girl dies. LOL, and damn.

loved the animation, music, and story. Needs smoothening, but overall id watch the continuation of this almost instinctively.


Kreid responds:

Good! Glad people want more


th1rt3enth1rt3en

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Well done, but I felt like it was missing something. Art, audio, acting, animation are all well done, but I can't quite put my finger on what wasn't working. Usually for me the 'cinematography' needs to pull me in, and I'm not feeling it here. Another reviewer mentioned too many close ups, and I'm inclined to agree. Some wider shots would give us space and environment clues, and can be used for better visual metaphors in certain scenes.

That said, the color palettes separating the mechanical from the living world was a nice choice. Looking forward to the next.


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Kreid responds:

Thanks, I'm definitely going to keep the cinematic works in mind, thanks for pointing those out :)
Glad you liked it, and thanks for the positives on the colours


firemomo45firemomo45

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Wow, That lord is a prick.
Good job, I want to see alot of this!


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Kreid responds:

Just doing his job


LordfireIce20LordfireIce20

Rated 5 / 5 stars

dude that was sooo cool. and i think i know y u called it "oddball" the girl that got killed isnt going to stay dead im thinking and her new "eye" is going to be that 8 ball. in any case this was good the art was very well done the music fit well and it all seemed to work well together great flash dude cant wait 4 the next 1


Kreid responds:

There's a few episodes out already, these are the prequels, so you'll see her with her 8-eye in those


AdrianoNieradkaAdrianoNieradka

Rated 5 / 5 stars

WHoa...
the story is awesome
i just can't think on what can happens next...
It's a very good one


Kreid responds:

Got 5 more chapters roughly planned