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In a world where a mechanical society controls death, one Timekeeper refuses to fulfil his role.
Commission info at:
Music by Jimmy Sudekum, OST downloadable on his page.
As always, thanks a bunch for the front page :)
Ohmagerd a daily first, THANKYOU!
Aaand a review pick, weekly 3rd and short spot as the 3rd top vid of all time. Seriously people, feel the love
ANd..... the girl dies. LOL, and damn.
loved the animation, music, and story. Needs smoothening, but overall id watch the continuation of this almost instinctively.
Good! Glad people want more
Well done, but I felt like it was missing something. Art, audio, acting, animation are all well done, but I can't quite put my finger on what wasn't working. Usually for me the 'cinematography' needs to pull me in, and I'm not feeling it here. Another reviewer mentioned too many close ups, and I'm inclined to agree. Some wider shots would give us space and environment clues, and can be used for better visual metaphors in certain scenes.
That said, the color palettes separating the mechanical from the living world was a nice choice. Looking forward to the next.
Thanks, I'm definitely going to keep the cinematic works in mind, thanks for pointing those out :)
Glad you liked it, and thanks for the positives on the colours
Wow, That lord is a prick.
Good job, I want to see alot of this!
Just doing his job
dude that was sooo cool. and i think i know y u called it "oddball" the girl that got killed isnt going to stay dead im thinking and her new "eye" is going to be that 8 ball. in any case this was good the art was very well done the music fit well and it all seemed to work well together great flash dude cant wait 4 the next 1
There's a few episodes out already, these are the prequels, so you'll see her with her 8-eye in those
the story is awesome
i just can't think on what can happens next...
It's a very good one
Got 5 more chapters roughly planned
ASTEROID HURLING TOWARDS EARTH!!!
tasty crunch of yummy cookie crumble
Detective Nwar is one day away from retirement.
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