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That was just flat out random and awesome! The style was a bit bland and rough on the edges if you will but it managed to get its story done with hilarious results! Audio was decent along with voice acting. Te minor complaints I have with the short is its light tough of lagging in some spots but not too bad in ruining the story. The other is when your movie restarts the animation's soundtrack is continuing as the film is replayed another format is added which then it sounds garbles and meshed up horribly. In order to get the single track again I have to reset the page. I'm guessing your style is mildy influenced by John K. of Ren & Stimpy creation? When I was watching this short it was like the animated segments of Monty Python is blended together with Ren & Stimpy with a hint of LSD thrown in in good measure which combine i together and this is your result! You've done good here friend, I really did like this short. I'm going to bestow you a 2 in a half out of 5. And a 2/5 in voting power/ Keep practicing, creating and contributing here. I hope you've enjoyed this review. Good day.

Yarr, a nice first movie. Keep on makin' them, you'll be the very best like no-one ever was if you create out of habit and not when you're feeling inspired :V