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That was hilarious for a good quick hearty laugh! The style is a bit bland and dry yet it was the story that I truly wanted to see. The audio was good and a bit loud but it delivered what needed to be said! Its nice to know though that this was your first voice over which I have to say congratulations! Again it was really hilarious in simplicity. Lets just say that I learned a great moral lesson here too. Some achievements are best not sought after in the end, Or you'll end up like that guy! I'm going to give you a solid 3/5 and a 3/5 in voting power. Keep practicing, creating and contributing on here! I hope you've also enjoyed this review. You did a great job and making me laugh and smile! Have a great day friend!

For me, I thought this joke could be told much more effectively. The whole "being tricked into clicking porn" or "being caught watching porn" gag has been done to death, but to be honest it can still be funny depending on the delivery.

Firstly, I found it kind of weird that you have written dialogue and a voice over. Was this an older cartoon you dubbed over? The written text is really distracting and was actually one of the biggest killers of this joke - the moment where it says "poo poo ooh stinky" it went completely downhill. The voice and the visuals need to go hand in hand, otherwise they feel disconnected and the audience will instantly feel like "this is someone talking to me directly" vs getting lost in the moment of the toon.

Secondly, I think your voice is fine but you need to play around with the levels on your microphone more. Sound design is something I struggle with myself, but it's worth taking the time to get right. The scream at the end for example sounded like you were trying not to wake the neighbours. You were holding back and we can hear it in your voice, so again the gag is lost.

I don't think this is terrible, just not what it could have been. Keep at it man!

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The graphics weren't that good, and if there was voice acting anyways, why did you have to put the dialogue box on him instead of animating him talking since you animated his eyes moving. Also, the video loops so practically the menu was useless...there was also the ending where there was flashing so....HOPE YOU WELL YOU GUYS WITH EPILEPSY.

Funny stuff. Not exactly what I'd call quality in terms of plot or animation, but there's some solid humor under there. If you're going to be doing voice-over stuff, I'd get some kind of cover on your mic. Some of those consonants were loud and harsh, and threw off the volume balance of the dialogue. That said, you got definite potential. Keep practicing that animation and you'll go far here.