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First part of a series of adventures.
I like cheesy stories in animations =P 3 Stars because I thought the animation in the rain needed a little work
A video with such poor animation needs a great story to compensate that. But the story is kinda predictable except the end which was senseless. I thought he want to revange his friends but suddenly he saves a toastgril? :D
Try better storys and a pinch of humor. That should work better :)
Thanks for the response. This is actually my first foray into character animation. I agree the story is predicatble and the animation a little simple. However, why can't saving toastgirl be an example of avenging his friends? He rescues a toast that would have otherwise been "toasted". I understand your criticism though. Thanks again for watching.
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