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***please watch before voting, don't let the title deceive you***
Well... here it is. And only 10 years late!
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Funny! The part near the beginning when Sora and Selphie decided to fight on the beach, that was almost the exact same thoughts I had running through my head when playing the game.
didn't laugh or smile at this. you have a major issue with joke context and timing. the entire time i was like "i have seen these set ups and pay offs before. where's the creativity? oh yeah i forgot this is a kingdom hearts parody on the internet".
you tried to make it spammy for comedic effect, but the rest had more effort put into it to the point where its neither good spam nor good parody. this isn't satire because its not over the top about the production and ideas themselves. its the execution of those drab ideas and mediocre at that.
you did get close to 1 chuckle when mickey said "then i used my house key", but then it went on, and fucking on with these boring, unfunny jokes.
tip: if you want to learn how to write, stop thinking that 'farts' are funny on a first reaction level. same with memes and other basic 'this existed' jokes. try to think of your own dialogue and how you can completely defy expectation.
thanks for the review, i'll work on it.
I love this game, good memories. Like Ngsage said, voice action was a little off but the overall product had me rolling in laughter!
This was hilarious! You brought me alot of memories back with this simple, silly, comedic short. You've actually got me to laugh some (Its very hard to make me laugh in flash animations since most works i review just don't punch me in the right spot). Your artistic style was in the so-so category mixed and blended well with anime expressions which I applaud to your imaginations. Audio was a bit soft, I had to literally put my computers speakers next to my ears to get the satisfying sound, yet I heard in certain points some good audio tracks play. I noticed some good original minded techniques that were executed quite well. For instance you recycled the dialogue from that giant Heartless thing 2 times. Also you've used one of your voice casts (or you my good sir) to replace and dub Goofy for the rest of the short. I noticed only minor creases to this short but its nothing to bad since it didn't ruin the pace of the story too much. I was glad you managed to make the final battle to Xehanort's a tiniy bit sooner since the last thing one wants to do is drag on too long with a story that everybody might be familiar with. One of the most outspoken things i witnessed that you've executed fairly well was your style of humor and that's randomness! That is one out of many favorite styles of humor that I simply adore and you delivered quite nicely. I'm going to bestow you a Solid 4/5 and a 4/5 in voting power. I really did enjoy this flash short I found it nostalgic, witty and plain funny! I hope you keep practicing, creating and contributing here. Its nice to have someone of your caliber here to bring smiles and hearty laughs to somebody (Believe me I needed a good laugh after the busy day I went through). I hope you've enjoyed this review friend and I hope you have a spectacular day! Good day.
thanks, glad i could lighten your day.
Man, that was awesome!
Can't beat that game!!
It's Payday Fellas !
GwainSaga - (Original Serie)
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