Newgrounds.com — Everything, By Everyone.

MY GOD...One of the funniest things I've seen here...

you are good and i laughed to

(\_/)
(._.)
(__) lol

This was rather entertaining and I like how you summed up most of the key points in Kingdom Hearts. The only part I think that could have been added was the short few minutes that Sora was a heartless and rescued by Kairi giving him a hug.

The animation was nice. I feel some parts could have been cleaned up a bit such as Donald's hat or Riku simply having dark shadows around his eyes. I found the light use of clip art pretty amusing since I get the feeling you may have been a bit crunched on time with getting this animation finished up.

The story was fun to watch since it covers most of the key points with a bit of humor added to it such as Mickey using various keys and Darkside whining that Sora attacked him. Curious to see if you will be doing a part II for the second game. Xemnas (false Ansem) beginning to play guitar was funny.

The audio used was mostly from the game except the Led Zepplin song playing when Ansem was getting ready to battle Sora, Donald, and Goofy. When Donald spoke on the Gummi Ship it sounded a bit like his voice was being backmasked more than being spliced. The other voices heard were fun to hear as well.

Overall, greatly entertaining piece that covers most of Kingdom Hearts.

I liked this submission overall, it just needs more consistancy. By that I mean that while some parts were very well made, there were other parts that just seemed lacking when compared to the rest of the flash. A prime example would be the fight scenes. While the rest of the flash was animated, when the characters would fight, it would cut to some pictures of the characters, there would be a fighting sound effect, and the fight would be over.

A way to remedy this without compromising the joke would be to make some character templates and have those bump into each other. Then there wouldn't be that distracting white box around the characters whenever they fight and it would look less cheap.

I also liked the voice acting, but found it inconsistent. Whenever Donald would talk, audio clips from the games would play instead of somebody's voice. While it was creative, it was also kind of jarring when everyone else would speak English and Donald would speak in discombobulated audio clips.

In summation, the flash is good, just try not to cut as many corners next time.

3/5

Review Request Club

Too bad I have never played any Kingdom Hearts game yet, even though I have always been interested in the games... oh well, I guess I missed out on a lot of fun. And I'm still missing out, since I guess I can't understand all the jokes in here.

Anyway, there where a few funny scenes in here. I liked it, when that big black thing got punched and he started crying. "Why did you have to do that?" It was even funnier the second time it happened. ^^

I also liked the length of this submission. Usually parodies are only a minute long or even shorter. But this submission clearly shows that you put a lot of effort into it, creating some kind of story line and creating your own jokes. The only thing I didn't like was when you used the cards instead of the characters. This looked too cheap for me.

Overal, this is yet another enjoyable submission.

{ Review Request Club }