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Including artwork by Andrew Hussie
this is totally bad, totally fake. N***A WUD KICK SUM WHITE DOOD ASS
Okay, how the hell did this get Featured? I know it's intentionally bad, but that doesn't automatically make it FUNNY. This was not funny, humourous or entertaining. The only good things about it are that
(1): it isn't broken (as far as I can tell)
(2): it's too short to be painful.
How can it be improved? Start over from the ground up. Actually put effort into the humour. Either remove the unrelated Homestuck reference, or make it a game based on Homestuck. I'd also advise against trying this form of stylistic suck again, as it is rarely implemented in a succesful way, and from this example, you are not likely to be capable of producing one of the rare successes.
I hear that some guy has a Kickstarter going to turn this into a full-length game.
The sequel to "Outpost:Haven"
Hunt The Candy!!!
A thrilling rush through cyberspace!
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