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late at night, the last thing I was expecting to find in the bus is this thing.
Don't we all have those days? That was an interesting piece yet it lacked two essential parts to it. Audio and a tad bit of a slower pace (Except for the big reveal as you've shown where that gentleman's shoulder is embedded in on a certain part to that obese man's body). Style was unique in a dreamy like sequence yet as mentioned in prior I didn't have too much time to enjoy or intake the style since it feels fast paced and flat out rushed. I enjoy as an observer to take everything in account and detail (for better or worse) and to never miss a single solitary fraction or pigment on what I am witnessing. But in great respect you've done and good job in creating something and showcasing it with great valiant pride! I'm going to bestow you a 2/5 and a 2/5 in voting power. Again try and pace yourself with your works in the future, you might get some surprising and unique results if you do! I hope you keep creating, practicing and contributing here. I also hoped you've enjoyed this review. Good day.
A short film about a park bench
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