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Sep 18, 2012 | 12:44 PM EDT

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This is a platform game, It's a demo, Level 2 and other levels will be released! soon!

Hope you like it! BTW It's my first game I've ever even posted on NG (Newgrounds).

It may contain some bugs, if you encounter any, please report by clicking "Review this content"!

;)

It's a stick game and it's my first :

Uh,, NAW,, Don't hate on me, please, i said it's a demo,

i will improve the graphics and many more bugfixes!

Reviews


EZacaEZaca

Rated 2 / 5 stars September 19, 2012

I fall, and fall, and fall more... but I never die! Yeah!... or not... This is really a demo, but there are very much bugs and the control must be improved... But it is a good game...


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hamza62240 responds:

OK, I will fix the bugs. I am currently working on more cooler greyish graphics, a burger shop in level 3 (There are more levels now, YAY!)

and much more.

BTW Thx for the line "But it is a good game...".


mktheGreatestmktheGreatest

Rated 2 / 5 stars September 18, 2012

Has potential like any other platformer but nothing else to it. The bug i encountered was when the character just fell through a platform even he landed right on top of it and fell continously until he went off the screen without a death screen.


hamza62240 responds:

Level 2 will be released,

the list of bugfixes i can do in the full version:

Level 2 and more levels
Graphics a bit improved
More secret areas and any of the bugs you people report me or i found myself.
NOT A FIX: at the last part, the reason why you fell is... THERES AN INVISIBLE GAP ^_^ ^_^


shinobodyshinobody

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars September 19, 2012

A) Get some music and sounds (from NG Audio Portal, or Freesound.org)
B) Make sure that players die if they fall (surround the map with trigger that kills you and restarts the level?)
C) Make sure there is some way to know which objects are fake. Having to guess "which block ahead is fake" with no hints or logic behind it is no fun. It's tedious.
D) Physics (collisions) suck to the point where game is unplayable.
E) Don't respond to criticisms "it's a demo". We know it. People tell what is bad in the game so you'll know what to fix in the full version.


hamza62240 responds:

OK, I am working on the restart box, more levels, bug fixes, fake object hints and more.

But sorry, i cannot fix the sound one cause i do not even know how to add sounds and i dunno why, YouTube is banned in my country O.O


anticontrol22anticontrol22

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars September 19, 2012

ok i understand that this is your first submission and i know that flash can be extremely nebulous and tedious to deal with and in my opinion you probably could do better but this game has very little playing value and is only fun for simple people or if you are stoned i do think u have potential and i apologize for being a blammer but this could not be considered a great game improve it by adding customization weapons and leveling make it a action game do whatever just please dont leave it as is do not let this rating discourage you i am not trying to be a hater get some input from friends play good games and learn from them analyze every detail and learn all you can message me your thoughts on my post i only tryed it once maybe tomorrow i might like it i dont know do what you like if u decide to get pissy with me i will inform u that i am very quick to anger and my intellect far exceeds most peoples and it will get ugly this is not a threat it is a fair warning


hamza62240 responds:

Ok, I understand your not a hater, but i also said it's just a demo, Oh, I did not add a main menu button, restart box, hp or game over, scene. BTW I will add just all bugfixes in the full version, i will add a hp bar, enemy's, level 2 will be increased and I will add more levels.


PetaminxPetaminx

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars September 18, 2012

It's ok, but most of it is glitched up. The moving platform doesn't work. The text is sometimes a platform itself (in the code). Some platforms are broken (yes I know some are on purpose, but some are actually broken and there shouldn't be any trick platforms or no one will want to play your game). These are a few glitches, but I don't want to waste my time listing all of them.


hamza62240 responds:

What? You said "The text is sometimes a platform itself (in the code)" When you jump on the text in the first part "seeeeeee?! I TOLD YOU NOTHIN WILL HAPPEM! i mean happen :P im stooooooooooooooooooooooooooopid stuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupid too. >:P", and jump again quickly to the left, it says "duh, kid, you can climb on some text :P BUAAHAHAHA".

I also found total of some bad glitches, yes, I know one glitch at the begenning with a easter egg secret area 1 i've added: go left, stick to the wall and hold jump until you get inside the wall. now fall right, left will kill you!